Healing Poem Idea

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Healing Poem Idea

Postby King_Dalnuk » Thu Apr 07, 2016 6:16 pm

I'm really interested in being a healer, and since I have some time I wrote up a poem to use. Wanted to get some feedback from the masses and see if there's anything that might need fixed.

Your path, oh righteous man, has been beset on all sides,
By the inequity of the selfish ones.
And the tyranny of evil men, who decide,
Who on this day shall live and die.

Blessed are you, my fallen champion,
You fight in the name of charity and good will.
You shepard the weak, and protect them like ambion,
Through the valley of darkness where evil ones wait.

For you are truly your brother's keeper,
And the lost children you find and save.
The evil will fear you, you are their reaper,
Rise now and raise your blade.

You will strike upon them with a great vengeance,
With a furious anger within your heart.
Your strike is true, your power endless,
Rise now and drive terror into their souls.

They attempt to poison and destroy your brothers,
And they shall know your name, when you lay your vengeance upon them.
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Re: Healing Poem Idea

Postby Ra' Shalm Swiftstrike » Fri Apr 22, 2016 3:47 pm

Seems to be just over 180 syllables! (though my count may be off  ;D) Rules wise I see no issue. Also pretty well written. Makes me want to smite someone!!!
Cool heads always prevail.

Two in harmony surpasses one in perfection.
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Re: Healing Poem Idea

Postby Rúnsær » Mon Aug 07, 2017 9:10 pm

I'm here to heal you, I have to get one hundred and eighty syllables out without being interrupted so I will be talking as fast as I can. If either of us gets attacked while I do this, then I will have to start over. Sometimes I just try to heal someone to draw in an attacker when they decide to leg you and leave you so watch out for attacks. You should really learn a healing poem yourself or maybe have one printed on the back of your shield so you can just read it off and heal someone else. Don't do the counting thing that is lame. It comes in handy when the respawn is far away or closed. Well I am almost done now just a few more words and you will be healed and your armor and shield will be healed too. On your mark, get set, you are healed.
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